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| "True Love and Swirly Skirts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sooooo great! The same thing happened to me too. I was totally absorbed. You have a great writing style and you can really grab the reader's attention. By the time I got to the end of this my eyes were watering. Terrific work! (^_^)
| Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH No fair. Here I was expecting to sit down and read a cute story. It was so SAD. I'm sniffling. I wasn't expecting a story like this. Orihime is such a sweet character. I think she and Ichigo would make a good couple. But then again Ichigo seems perfect for like 6 or 7 different people in the manga. and I can think of at least 3 other people that would be cute with Orihime Still I got a soft spot for Orihime/Ichigo. Great story, really emotional, it draws you in so quickly and powerfully. I was reading it and like the world disappeared around me. My sister got mad cause she had to yell at me 3 times before I was like 'what?'. This is a great story, that I think you should continue. I know its probably only a one shot...but still I can hope right?
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