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| "The Tragedy of Shikon" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Evil zone
Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Evil Zone!! What's THAT?! Is... is it your project perhaps?
| Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Oops. I sumbitted my review twice! ^.^ Sorry about that, I didn't think it was working. So yeah... but your second chapter's good! Now people will think your story's really great because you got two super-long reviews! Teehee...
| Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a nice job tying everything together, making parallels and such between your story and the real thing. A virus huh? I never would have thought of that, so nice job Ces, you're original! And it sounds like it's going to be quite a story. I like that sort of thing, the future stuff, you know? It's interesting to think what might happen. And hey... you never know, right? Maybe it will! I've got an idea for a story of my own too, a new one. I plan on calling it God Eater, and it's going to be about... duh. Sasuke. He's my favorite character, right up there with Itachi-sama. But you know, there's an Akatsuki member named Hidan I've also discovered. He's immortal, swears like crazy, and I love him. ANYWAY... Yeah, my story's going to be about Sasuke, and already in the first chapter I've written, Orochimaru's had someone murdered. It's realy cool, and I'm so proud of myself for thinking it up. It's sneaky and underhanded, and no one ever knows. Until later. I'm planning to write it all before I post it though, because I started another story (FMA) and I got through two chapters, but once I'd posted those two, it didn't get so very many reviews. I got sort of disheartned, and I don't think I really got into it the way I should have, to make it that I could have continued even if peope didn't review as much as I would have liked. I like my new way better, because that way I'm not worrying about what people will think so much as getting into it and finishing it perfectly. Then I can post it and get people's input, and I can keep posting even if they don't review a lot. I'm going to do that, and also, in this book I read about writing (kind of wierd, huh? reading a book about writing), it recommended editing. Going back and slicing stuff out. I never did that before, and going back and reading over some of my stuff again, I can tell. Beyond spelling mistakes and wrong word usage and whatnot, it's like... things happen that doesn't really make any sense. Or, something happens, and I just know I could have made it so much better, only now I'm too lazy to go back and do it. ANYWAY... Keep up the good work, I hope you can develop a good thing for thins, because it's rather promising, yeah?
| Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a nice job tying everything together, making parallels and such between your story and the real thing. A virus huh? I never would have thought of that, so nice job Ces, you're original! And it sounds like it's going to be quite a story. I like that sort of thing, the future stuff, you know? It's interesting to think what might happen. And hey... you never know, right? Maybe it will! I've got an idea for a story of my own too, a new one. I plan on calling it God Eater, and it's going to be about... duh. Sasuke. He's my favorite character, right up there with Itachi-sama. But you know, there's an Akatsuki member named Hidan I've also discovered. He's immortal, swears like crazy, and I love him. ANYWAY... Yeah, my story's going to be about Sasuke, and already in the first chapter I've written, Orochimaru's had someone murdered. It's realy cool, and I'm so proud of myself for thinking it up. It's sneaky and underhanded, and no one ever knows. Until later. I'm planning to write it all before I post it though, because I started another story (FMA) and I got through two chapters, but once I'd posted those two, it didn't get so very many reviews. I got sort of disheartned, and I don't think I really got into it the way I should have, to make it that I could have continued even if peope didn't review as much as I would have liked. I like my new way better, because that way I'm not worrying about what people will think so much as getting into it and finishing it perfectly. Then I can post it and get people's input, and I can keep posting even if they don't review a lot. I'm going to do that, and also, in this book I read about writing (kind of wierd, huh? reading a book about writing), it recommended editing. Going back and slicing stuff out. I never did that before, and going back and reading over some of my stuff again, I can tell. Beyond spelling mistakes and wrong word usage and whatnot, it's like... things happen that doesn't really make any sense. Or, something happens, and I just know I could have made it so much better, only now I'm too lazy to go back and do it. ANYWAY... Keep up the good work, I hope you can develop a good thing for thins, because it's rather promising, yeah?
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