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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 05:26 EDT
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What a fabulously AWESOME chapter!! Thanks so much for the nice, LONG one! There was a lot of action in this. Loved Kagome purifying Kagura to dust and getting Hinata's soul released. She and Itachi seem to be getting closer and closer. I really liked the way you had him spar and train with her for the finals -- nice touch. Great touch of humor when you had Naruto and Kagome calling Jiraya on his broken promises. LOL!! I liked her wishing Neji well and kissing him on the cheek like she did Natuto. Poor Sasuke. And it was great that you had Neji and Naruto's match come out a draw. Shoot, I forget, how old are Kagome and Naruto here? 13? I went back and skimmed through the last couple of chapter to refresh my memory of the story to this point, and I am still blown away by Itachi telling Sasuke that he may have been her first kiss, but that HE would always be her first love. I'm still loving the various guys getting so attached to her. (Neji, too, right?) And I think I missed the part earlier about Orochimaru wanting Kagome and Sasuke to produce the perfect vessel for him -- he was talking a child, right? How did I miss that? I really liked her little dream sequence where she was talking to Sess, Inu, and Shippou -- remembrances of her past existence.) I liked the other villages reaction to the news that the Leaf village had a true miko. Your explanations of the demons and vessels, etc. is really, really good. You're integrating these two shows and characters so perfectly. I can't wait to see what all happens during the attack!! Great chapter!!
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Title: I Love It!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! It tooka while (mild understatment but it was still good) this chapter is mind blowing. I have to ask but what the hell took so long.
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Reviewed By: Cupid101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg tat was soo awesome! plz update soon! i can understand tho tat it prob takes u a while kuz of the fact tat ur chappies are so long (and im very happy kuz of tat!) plz update soon! momo-fuzz
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Reviewed By: Triva On: July 29, 2007 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction incorporates the dispositions of the original characters while positioning them in different scenarios. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have actually read this story several times. I just can't remember if I reviewed it or not. This story is amazing. I both love and hate the cliff hanger at the end of the last chapter. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter to find out how the fight between Kagura and Kagome goes. I absolutely love this story.
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O_O i cant wait for the next one!XD
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I absolutly love, LOVE!!!!!, your fanfic. It is one of the most well written, flowing, and bestest crossover fanfic ever, in like eternity. You have soo got to update soon cause Kagome has gotta woop Kagura's butt and get Hinata's soul back and stuff. Love this fic so much update soon please, and keep writting cause it's obvious you've got a passion for it and your great at it. Woooh!!!! :3
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 09:37 EDT
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OHHHHH evil Cliffie !!!! NOOOO Update fast please ^^ Can´t wait to read more so please please update !!!! I love how Kagome is ^^ So don´t worry.
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Reviewed By: Goddess Of the Moon Selene On: June 11, 2007 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KICK HER ASS KAGOME!!!!*goes down to click on next chapter* What?? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO its not there *sobs uncontrollably but suddenly perks up and gives moogledaime the cutist puppy dog eyes ever* "You'll update soon right?" * wimpers for added effect then peeks to see moogledaime's reaction and hopes for the best* plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Bookworm51485 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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First I should say, you a pretty good writer. You've managed to write one of the very few good Inuyasha/Naruto crossovers out there. So kudos on that. But I will say, I wish Naruto was a little more of a main character, I get that the focus is on Kagome, but I still want to see more with him and not in connection to his relationship with Kagome. Also I can see that your leading towards an Itachi/Kagome pairing. But do you have any other pairings in mind for the characters? If your not offended by the idea, may I express my wish for a non-het pairing for Naruto :D I always love it when he's paired with Neji, or Gaara (them seme, him uke). Moving on again, there wasn't any real mention of Gaara in your last chapter, but will he play a role in later chapters. And Orochimaru, if he has Kanna and Kagura, does that mean that he knows that Kagome is a miko? And I think that's all I have. I'll just end with good story and I hope you update again soon. It has been awhile, a little over a month.
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Reviewed By: snowecat (not signed in) On: May 13, 2007 17:22 EDT
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Way wild, does Kagura know WHO Kagome is, not just what she is? Sounds like Oorichimaru and Naraku would be best buds in this. Where is Sango and Inuyasha? Kyuubi seems to be Shippo and the Two-Tailed Cat is obviously Kirara. Where does everyone else fit in this? Hope you update soon.
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Title: kick-ass
Reviewed By: heartsImmortal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are soo awsome this is one of the best naruto/inuyasha crossovers I have ever read. you soo have to update soon!. i've been killing myself to get back on the comp to read more for the past week. poor hinata, i was confused at first untill you mentioned the mirror and kanna and i was like "oh shit!" I hope kagome kicks kagura's ass! >,< and I hope kagome summons sesshy-chan soon! the FFX refrince is cool. awww Itachi's all cute with the posesiveness. I kinda feel sorry for Neji because he has a thing for kagome too. I kinda feel sorry for sasuke but he's getting on my nerves too lol. I wasen't sure at first but I kinda figured that you had some how made shippo the kyuubi. please update soon, don't leave us hanging! Ja ne!
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Lady Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I was starting to think that you turned into those lazy asses that only update once a year. Loved the chaps by the way.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. I stayed up all night to read it. I also can hardly wait until the naext chapet is up. Very good work.
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Reviewed By: tickledorteen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! I love this! I cant wait for the next chapter!!=3
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