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Title: Question
Reviewed By: MotherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2012 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Will you be continuing this story? Please e-mail if you are or if your not? I love your story so much I'd love to read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Blue Rhapsody3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I'm so in love with this story. It kept me going and I kept thinking during school today what the next chapter would be like and so on. You have a very good story plot going here so please continue with it. ^_^Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 15:14 EST
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Okay ch 11 (I plan on going back and reviewing chapters) made me really happy because I had been trying to figure out some things for a while. I got the jist that I would see Inu Yasha in some form but you had 3 possible story elements for him to pop up from. He could have either been the dog ABNU who never showed his face, a future summons or incarnated into a certain someone (the incarnate clue came in a chapter opener and the fact that Naruto developed the Inu Yasha characteristic of biting. I can now go with door number 3. Also it looks like Naraku and possibly Sango-hey Kakashi could be someone-might have shared the same fate as Inu Yasha. I hope that you will find inspiration to write some more...Inu Yasha as a series was overshadowed by Naruto for me and it's making me miss the show. I hope that Naruto will have some big scenes....I know that the characters feel like Kagome needs more coddling and that can make it seem as if she's weak sometimes, but I had enough experience with Inu Yasha to know she would end up with the best powers/abilities. I am ready to see your ideas on how Kagome is going to surpass her plateau, but I also think that Naruto might miss the chance to bond with Gaara if Sesshomaru (he's my favorite too :) takes the show. I have been wondering how they would cope knowing that Naruto is the nine tail's jailer. Next I have to give you credit. I figured Kikyou would come, but I didn't know how. I figured that when Kagome was a baby, she used purification to make Ryuk let go of the soul and missed the piece of soul angle. Last, I am not a writer, but would you be offended if I ever got around to writing in this fic's universe?
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:41 EST
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Chapter 2 is good at explaining what Kagome is and I'm glad I wasn't turned off (no offense, it's the miko hanyou fairy blah blah fics that have hardened me to new ideas). I was really happy with the reactions/results of Orochimaru and Neji. Rochi seems like he should make babies cry and of course I hate the curse seal. I hope you feel inspired to write side fics about their childhood before the academy.
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 21:35 EST
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Oh I could tell I like this from the first chapter. I want to find out if Shippou is a grown up Kyuubi (so I'll keep on reading) but 1.) Alive Yondie fics are my joy 2.) You're the first Inu crossover I ever gave a chance and 3.)Possible Kagome ninga-YESSERS!
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Reviewed By: Kiros_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 22:32 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: k a z o ku
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 20:48 EDT
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this was a vray good story
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 19:10 EDT
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That was funny are you gunna update soon? Oh and please give kagome her memoories back or some more of her miko powers that she CAN control cause this is killing me
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Reviewed By: mi perro es no mi gato On: September 01, 2007 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so cool!!!! Fluffy just got sat!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 01:28 EDT
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you are by far a most splendiferous writer, and I'm seriously wondering about that comment Sesshomaru made about Sasuke being an Uchiha. Did his family somehow make themselves known to the intimidating western lord that made a lasting impression? and was he... actually sat? I'm trying to picture it in my head and it doesn't seem right but at the same time it most certainly does and his reaction is most definitely correct. *snickers* Oh to see him with that speck of dirt on his nose.
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update, please update again soon. i've been waiting for her to summon sesshomaru since she summoned jakken, i couldn't wit to see what he would be like as a summon, it was awesome.
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Title: You Is Love
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sqeeee! You finally summoned Sesshoumaru! I've been waiting for him ever since Jaken popped up~! I love love love love your story. No words can describe how much love I feel right now. You have to update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay Update. This chapter is awesome. Need I say more?
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, this story is awesome!!!! i can't wait to find out what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: Jess.waz.ere On: August 06, 2007 21:28 EDT
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Hey good fic!!! I hope this is a Kag/Ita story!!! The other guys should figure out that shes 'taken' or wateva but good story!!! keep up the good work!
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