| "Exotic Dancer" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: cessasmm505 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2016 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, though it's confusing with far too much
repetition and bad grammar. Wrong usage of verbiage is a pet peeve
of mine, so it's hard to continue when I have to restructure the
sentence in my head to have it make sense. I like the concept, and
what you've done with it- but if you want to be a serious writer
have a beta or do a re-read to catch errors. And always use the
full word for until- it's the proper from for writing, but of
course you can use it for conversations. It's overall a good story,
and with good editing it had the potential to be a great one. Good
Job! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2012 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story couldn't stop read till i was to the last chapter |
Title: miss scorpia
Reviewed By: miss scorpia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2012 05:53 PST
Comment/Review:
I too hope you will continue this story. ^_^ It's an interesting concept. |
Title: i like stories that are desciptive and langthy
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2011 05:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is Great Keep up the GOOD work |
Reviewed By: su On: April 15, 2011 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope u don't give up on this story. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 22:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
yum! hope to see an update here soon! I love it
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2010 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. please update soon!
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Title: very interesting
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 16:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like where you are taking this story so far. I hope you continue writing this fic. It is very good.
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Reviewed By: Violet62 (nt) On: June 18, 2010 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep updating, I really like your story. Look forward to seeing your next chapter !
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah.. cliff hanger!! Great update.. love this story..!!!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2010 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah woah woah,,! Hot fic!
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Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 16:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
this was a really good chapter! and cant wait till the next one. oh...and can u please update Off Limits?
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 07:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
90% OF THE PEOPLE WHO READ A STORY NEVER LEAVE A REVIEW! I know because I'm one of them! I really like where this story is going I've been waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. I hope you haven't abandoned it out of frustration. It really is interesting and you're writing style is good. Don't get too disappointed over inconsiderate readers like myself, you have a talent and a good storyline to work with.
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Title: wowza XD
Reviewed By: mynameisevile [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
getting along really well... i wonder what might happen next... (ponders) i know how it feels like, when you get no reviews, oh and can u return the favor plz, im writin a fic at the moment, its called unrequited feelings... it would be coolz, if you reviewed... (ents rand here) over and outz!! -the dark soul priestess of the underworld-
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 02:35 PST
Comment/Review:
I know how you feel with regards to reviews, anyway its a good story, comming along really well keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Happy Clam On: January 29, 2007 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't lose faith Kitten, you are building this story up very nicely and so far it's shaping up to be a good read! Keep up the good work, I eagerly anticipate your next chapters!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 05:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like its going to be a good AU keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: mely On: January 04, 2007 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks pretty interesting so far. This story has potential.
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