| "Sloth's Hunger (Sweet corruption)" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Ummmm...
Reviewed By: Kathy lee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh...it's ok. Maybe it would have been sexier if Ed DIDN'T want it. (thinks about it) Yeah. It was...different.
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Reviewed By: lorddane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha, I'm so going to hell for enjoying this. Keep it up! I eagerly await your next relaese ^_^
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
umm, that's all I can say for now except that I am going to hell with you. Actually you do have a very original pairing and definately made ed a pervert or was sloth the one? Probably both. I really hope that if you do write another that I don't read it, so that I don't end-up in the really bad parts of hell. Although if I know myself I will be checking back on this one since once I get caught-up in a story I don't put it down till it's finished. Oh well as far as hell is concerned, you did a good job.
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Reviewed By: Trepidation On: February 23, 2007 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just when I thought it couldn't get any better than your first chapter, you go and add a second. Very unique, very impressive. I'm looking forwards to anything you may have to write in the future.
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Reviewed By: tacktician On: February 18, 2007 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved the story and liked the pairing you used. I hoped you do make a sequel because I want to know what happens next. good luck and happy writing
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Reviewed By: Colonel.Mustang On: February 10, 2007 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
........O.................k......that............was....................... .................................................different.......i think.......???????
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Reviewed By: crimson_blade17 On: January 14, 2007 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. i think that it could have been a little bit longer, but it was good and original. you should write one about wynry too.
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