| "Soul Blues for Raditz and Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 14, 2007 18:26 CDT
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Cool update! It's interesting that Raditz and even their parents are accepting some earth traditons and trying to mix the two cultures together in training their kids. Does that mean that Gohan's birthday will have cake blown in your face like on the show, and even though Goku, Radditz and Stellari know that ChiChi's pregnant, what's the bet that one of the kids spill the beans about the announcment when they return home and hug her and feel the extra energy from her.
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Title: Nice story
Reviewed By: Metal-Man On: September 02, 2007 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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The story is nice, it's well writen but it needs more explanation at the begining - it should be stated clearly whether it's a sequel to one of your earlier stories. As a side note - what's with the charachters' names? Fermi? Bohr? Will there be a Plank an Einstein? or maybe an Oppenheimer? XD
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 16, 2007 19:38 CDT
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Hey! Cool update, interested to see how ChiChi will take it all in if Goku tells her while eating breakfast in bed, and also how Stellari will feel about teaching her kids about saiyan and earth traditions.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 16, 2007 20:59 CDT
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It'd be interesting to see if goku tries a mind bond with ChiChi the next morning, now that Raditz has shown him how to do it, and how bitchy will she be about saiyans in the morning.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 13, 2007 21:40 CDT
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Both versions were awsome!! I'm interested with Vegeta and Bulma joining in on the mind session between the four of them, how would it have looked from Vegeta and Bulma's POV, and would they do anything similar?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 12, 2007 20:08 CDT
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Hopefully ChiChi won't be so bitchy, just as well Raditz and Stellari were there too or otherwise she'd never get it. Hopefully the experience will change chiChi's perceptions about sayians and remove that negative "stigma" she has on the alien warriors, especially after witnessing Vegeta's plea to Goku on Namek.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 09, 2007 21:23 CDT
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ChiChi sure can whinge!! But then again, being a princess and high maintenance would do that, especially since she thinks she's not getting what she wants. Maybe Stellari should have told her that to saiyan male, fighting is their job because they're warriors born like any other soldier, and since she is a trained solider herself and was once married to a soldier and fought on the front lines, Stellari has a better understanding of that part of saiyan life, since ChiChi refuses to accept that part of Goku, or try to turn Goku back to the way he was before he met Raditz the first time and revealed everything. Maybe someone should have told her that she ought to be grateful that the dragonballs can revive Goku even if he died in battle.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 07, 2007 20:06 CDT
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What's dinner and dessert going to be like, LOL!! Knowing the saiyans they might want to hunt down their wives to burn off the meal LOL.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 03, 2007 19:48 CDT
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PLEASE continue this, I'd love to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 02, 2007 19:23 CDT
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BRAVO!!! LOL. Maybe Stellari should have told ChiChi that if she wanted to live a life of normalicy, then she shouldn't have married a saiyan. I'm glad someone told her that all that studying Gohan is doing would amount to nothing if there isn't even a planet to live on and use those skills.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 15, 2007 17:27 CST
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I thought it was chapter 49 in RNB where Raditz went super saiyan just before Stellari gave birth. Also, Goku and Raditz sharing battle stories while fishing near Korin's Tower, that's a chapter to see in detail LOL.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 17, 2007 18:34 CST
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Do you ever plan on doing a companion piece for Namekian Blues regarding Launch and Nappa?
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