Title: cute Reviewed By: kuchiku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 09:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this was cute, i really liked how you made the rose background break (thats what i would expect to happen after the king was told by haruhi)! plus, i loved when they were all thinking about the future, that was funny when haruhi broke another vase! make another one if u can!!!
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