| "The Beautiful Breakdown" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the hinataXnaruto!! please update soon i was left with hinata being poisoned and i want to continue!! *shakes computer madly* please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: hinata_obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
well written! but just so you know, the fire country doesn't have ninja headbands. the villages in the country do. and ninja only scratch out their symbol if they are in akatsuki. otherwise they just keep them normal, like zabuza and Haku
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Title: review
Reviewed By: hinata_obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...your story is interesting, but uh... you said they were travelling to the land of fire. Konoha is IN the land of fire. ^_^;
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Title: update!!!
Reviewed By: animegurl9164 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
lol that was cute. i luv the hinaXnaru moments! update sooon!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting cant wait to see what happens!
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