| "The Cat and the Sparrow" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:17 CST
Comment/Review:
like* -.-;;
|
Title: Interesting . . .
Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that I enjoy this story. It's interesting so far. Um, constructive critism? Uh, okay. I wish you wouldn't do stuff liek this: "Well that's too bad. But Shisui-kun can surely join us some other time right?" . . . I think it is kind of distracting. That is all! Update soon? : )
|
Reviewed By: _uchiha girl_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 04:56 CST
Comment/Review:
cute ^^ i really like your shisui ^^
|
