| "Table For Two" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
You put breathe in the first chapter...I'm pretty sure you meant breath. Other than that I really had a hard time finding mistakes. You did a real good job! I cant wait to read more.
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 06:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very intriguing story. Excellent spelling and grammar too. I'm enjoying it very much and hope that you continue. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good cant wait for an update. .^_^.
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Reviewed By: Chaos_Theory_Proven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 02:54 CST
Comment/Review:
intriguing looking forward to reading more soon
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Reviewed By: Kooris_Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
sounds like a good fanfic so far keep up the good work can't wait to read more from this...
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