| "HIStory and HERstory" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful. Very angsty!! I really love it! Please update soon![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 14, 2002 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-I think Veggie needs to take a pill. Yeah, I hate alarm clocks as much as the next person, but I have yet to disintegrate one. Sorry, I didn't mean to ride you butt about this chap. If you're super busy then continue when you can. Just don't forget about ok? This fic is so good ^_^. TTYL-Sue[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 22:08 CDT
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I'm not rating yet...still in the middle of reading silly! But you've got me hooked...and you certainly have a, unique take on the inner thoughts of Bulma and Vegeta...refreshing after you've read tons that are all the same...
JadaKirin[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 00:43 CDT
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Dude what happened?? I've been waiting for so long for an update and I end up getting teased. I thought they were supposed to meet. Please update soon.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 10:50 CDT
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I'm waiting ;)[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 12, 2002 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this so long ago. And now I am finally reviewing. Be happy. Any ways I really like this, and it is a really good for the "person" it is written in. Really good, that's why I enjoyed it so much. I have to read chapter 3 now...[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 08, 2002 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, talk about angst! Poor Bulma, I can almost feel myself breaking down along with her. Like the other chapters, this was excellent and well written.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 31, 2002 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap!! This was fantastic! Man, can you write! I swear that I could her Bulma's voice throughout the story. Excellent. Write more ^_^![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 19, 2002 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliantly written. You managed to describe Veggie's personality down to a T. Can't wait to read more. Peace[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 22:37 CDT
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Haha! I love it. That's so totally our own saiya-jin no ouji's point of view ^_^
But, some advice..
When you use a quote (i.e. someone talking) you capitalize the letter after, and the punctuation (periods or commas) go inside the quotes. Like so;
“Humans are formidable adversaries. Preying on them is a real challenge” came a sarcastic retort. -> “Humans are formidable adversaries. Preying on them is a real challenge," came a sarcastic retort. Or..
“Humans are formidable adversaries. Preying on them is a real challenge." Came a sarcastic retort.
Just some advice ^_^ I like it so far! Interesting use of capitals, hehe. Sounds very IC. :)[ Request Review Removal ] |
