"Where I Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Forsakenfox On: August 17, 2009 03:06 CDT Comment/Review: Looks good so far, I hope you'll continue writing chapters!
| Title: Wow Reviewed By: ShadowedDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 17:53 CDT Comment/Review: This was getting good. It had some errors, but it was good.
| Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 19:24 CDT Comment/Review: OMG iam the first reviwer and i loved your story! oh and her name isn't rin it's len! and you sould probably double space your paragraphs so that people can read it easyier! Otherwise Good job and i can't wait to read more!!!!
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