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| "Where The Heart Is" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O... Wow. That was different. I'd have never thought of something like that. I wonder how Ray would feel about this, or did she know?? It seemed to hint at the fact that she may have! Maybe they're a swinger couple! This was highly disturbing but rather well written. I had a similar idea for a different fandom but I didn't have the courage to write it. I do commend you! I can't think of any critique. No unneeded dialog, the story didn't progress too quickly nor did it drag, and despite the wrongness of the lemon scene, it was pretty hot. *thumbs up*
| Title: Where the Stomach Is :)
Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sick -- but I like it. And, I'm not sure why? You delivered on the warning. Other than a few grammar errors, it's very well written. Good Job!
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