| "Deceit" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Noah_Kitsune666 On: August 30, 2010 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this is going. I hope there will be more. I dont read too many cop based stories.
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Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 00:53 CDT
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i like it! write soon! :)
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 00:49 CDT
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good chapter. im sooo happy kiba is ok. i meant to read this chapter sooner but i havent had internet. ne ways update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 21:22 CDT
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Its a little choppy but I like it.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 21:10 CST
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did someone get shot?? plz update soon. im practically dieing 2 find out wat will happen next.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 09:56 CST
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AHHH what happened please dont wait to long to update!!
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Reviewed By: Xxmoonlit-UchihaxX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 09:43 CST
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pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase update i like it so far
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Reviewed By: lo On: January 19, 2007 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!! I can't wait for you to continue. While progressing the story you gave the reader background information as well. Nice work!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 18:56 CST
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funny. hurry up w/ the next update plz.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:52 CST
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OOOO a robbery this is very cool keep up the good work and update again soon please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: xmoonlightx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 02:10 CST
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write more write more^^
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Reviewed By: yaoiyaoiyaoi On: January 07, 2007 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it. Update really soon
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Reviewed By: ElectrifiedMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really find this story interesting to read. I also like your style of writing, it's very professional.I'm sure this story will be a very good one and I look forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 20:50 CST
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interesting. i lyk it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 14:57 CST
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I like it so far so keep up the good work, update soon please and thank you!
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