Reviewed By:NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 03:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is a good story. I think you should keep going with this story and put more chapters to it. I know you said it was a one shot, but it good story to keep going. I know a good story when I see one, I have read a lot of good stories and your's is one of them. This story is to good to be a one shot story.