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| "Serenity" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: 118-sethshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you've seen my reviews so I'm just here to review the lemon. It's good, like your others are, and sadly I found lots of errors in it, mispelling lips, using "bring" when it should be another word, and there are more I don't remember as of now. So yeah, S&G is bad, but the story and lemon themselves were good. I'm looking forward to your next story.
| Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
i said ti once and I'll say it again, Kira's a lucky bastard! i want to see Lacus in a santa outfit, get a lapdance, and the get laid by Lacus! LOL! that wa sa good lemon and i can't wait for more.
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