Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Let's start at the beginning, shall we? //This is a story I wrote.// Really? Didn't anyone tell you? You're only supposed to write stories by *other* people. //It features my favorite couple Seto Kaiba and Joey Wheeler!!!// A simple SetoxJoey would have saved you a lot of characters. Then maybe you would have had the space to write a proper summary. //(Fan girl squeal) I also have it on AdultFanFiction.net...// I'd like to know how a pre-teen managed to publish anything on AFFnet, considering that they have an age minimum of 18. And, before you get all bent out of shape about my assumption concerning your age, allow me to reiterate...//(Fan girl squeal)//...enough said. By the way, the answer is, "No, I did NOT read the fic". I do occasionally read yaoi written by young people, but not ones who are still in grade school. In other words; I'm reviewing the summary instead of the fic, because after reading the summary, you couldn't pay me to read that fic.
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