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| "Pokemon: A new chapter" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: February 01, 2007 05:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write another chapter soon.
| Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: angel-of-time On: January 13, 2007 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were short chapters, but kind of good at the same time. I like the way you think of it, creating some pr-evolution forms for Pokemon which hardly evolve (example: Vulpix to Ninetales), it is good and I am quite happy to see that you have not done that to Pokemon which already evolve three times (or into 7 different Pokmon types like Eevee). The Grammar was very good, you do not see that all too often either. Just to give you a tip, try to explain the battles and the background a little more. I don't mean to offend you, but this will help make the chapters you write longer, plus the reader can picture more detailed things while he or she reads. Wish you luck onwards, don't give up!
| Reviewed By: ShadowFox118 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 11:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you! It was on fanfiction.net but so many people hated it that I took it down>
| Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: January 12, 2007 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so interesting to read! My lil bro likes Pokemon so i was looking up some fanfic. I hope you continue this story because i enjoyed reading it! Please do your best and don't worry if anyone bad-mouths this story 'cos it's good! ^-^
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