| "Dragoon Tales: The New Legend" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: trp0522 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 09:04 CST
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Review for chapter 5: Love the Rei/Usagi moments; thought I wonder how long will it take for Rei to realize "the future" is right besides her in form of Usagi. I especially like the scene that only Rei understood Usagi when she was eating with her mouth full of food. Thanks for the update
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Reviewed By: trp0522 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 14:37 CST
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Review for chapter 3 & 4, good descriptive fight scene, I like how you brought in Makoto. I hope don't take this the wrong way, however I thought the fact that their horses mysteriously disappeared was kinda weak when you could have easily written that they had to abandon the horses because the trail they were on was only passable on foot. Hopefully you would take this as constructive criticism and not as an attack on your writing. Overall good job and thank you for the update.
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Reviewed By: trp0522 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 18:23 CST
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Nice start on the story, very descriptive I almost did not recognized Setsuna due to the fact I was used to her described as having green hair not black but it looks like you are using the real world hair color instead of anime hair color. Nevertheless, excellent start I look forward to your next posting
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