"Dragonball Z incident" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 19:04 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: aw man another short chapter, you should check out my lemon and review! i'm very graphic with my lemons but over all this is a great fic. |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 19:02 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey this is a good start for a chapter you should of made it longer. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2002 20:57 CDT Comment/Review: it's never gonna be 'absolutely fantastic', but please do write another chapter. I'm getting really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY bored with what you have so far. If you add more, well then things might change . . . |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 20:10 CDT Comment/Review: Pretty good, but make the chapters a little longer and it will be absolutely fantastic. |
Reviewed By: dbzfan33 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 21:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The Best |