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"Distractions" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2007 00:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I hope you're pleased with yourself, making me think about Omi and sex at the same time. At least I got a lovely peek at Yoji and Aya all sensual, abandoned and... breathy. Liked those movements hidden by the water. Oh, and Aya's startling, unexpected smile. Poor Omi - I'd risk intestine-removal, too. So I was quite pleased with all that (except thinking about Omi and sex at the same time) even before the hilarious and unexpected punchline - now, there was a metaphor! Thanks for that - had me a real good time.
 Reviewed By: F5Bobcat  On: January 13, 2007 06:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This is absolutely HILARIOUS!!!!! I was laughing so hard I woke my sister. I can't wait to see more!

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