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| "Keep Me Guessing" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 08:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This, I must admit, is beautiful :) I love it a lot. It's very nicely thought out, and wow. Plus, there are very few errors :) Towards the end, here, you use his instead of he or him a few times... But that's an easy error to fix :) Or, perhaps not an error worth fixing for a while. Very well done. This deserves a round of applause!
| Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... That was great!! I laughed (Reubik's cube and dent in wall!lol I can relate), I teared (charm bracelet, clown mask), and I was curious about the others gifts, but mostly I smiled. It's always lovely to see someone realize a love that has always been there waiting for them... and answering it in kind. This was easily decided to be a favorite of mine. Great job!! You almost made me wish it was Christmas now... ~Duchess~
| Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cute story. One minor nit: the 12 Days of Christmas are the 12 days after, not before.
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