| "My master, My slave" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Title: My Master, My Slave
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Beautifulyreal On: June 23, 2007 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I was reading your story but chapters 1 & 2 run off the page. The formating is screwed. If after a few tries you can't get it fixed you should alert the webmaster so they can help in. In the future I suggest checking each chapter after posting it. Trust me, it save a lot of unecessary compliants in the long run. When you fix the chapters email me and let me know. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: pup (off) On: June 11, 2007 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting... well-written prologue!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 08:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummmmm i have a request...... i started reading until i hit the 2nd chapter.... and well i couldnt read most of it... it was cut off by the edges... so can you please fix it?? PLEASE!!???!!!! *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: May 31, 2007 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like this fic. please write more!!!!!!!!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: adea nerii On: May 29, 2007 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this please update often. is this going to be a happy ending ? loved it. dont remember the girls age
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOund very good so far please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Annona must review On: May 10, 2007 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: gimme mo" On: May 10, 2007 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I ubber lub'd it. pleez ^date
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Title: eeeeexcelint
Reviewed By: Rin-Amazez On: May 10, 2007 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful plz add more. By the way u have the wrong 2nd chapter up. plz fix that
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Reviewed By: diamondclear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha cool. update soon kay? :DD btw, i think you replaced the first chapter with the second one...making both chapters exactly the same o_o
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Reviewed By: aj On: May 08, 2007 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it update soon soon.
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Reviewed By: SexyKittenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update soon, I want to see what happens next! It's awesome so far, and that's only the prologue!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: April 06, 2007 07:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Could you write more?
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Reviewed By: Darkness lady m aster On: March 08, 2007 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really like it, it seem really interesting and i defenetly want to read more, so please continue n_n
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Reviewed By: Jiina On: January 22, 2007 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time for a slave and master fanfic i've been looking for one for a long time update soon can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: good
Reviewed By: massiebutt On: January 14, 2007 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good beginning... please update..
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Reviewed By: InusBasket [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 03:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! nice begginer.Update soon =D
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story seems to be really good, write more = update soon!!! ^.^i'll be waiting........................still waiting..............XXD
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