"Angst" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Love it Reviewed By: Rahuran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Been looking all night for a Nagisa/Shizuma fic with initimacy. It was pretty good as far as I can tell, though I did notice an overuse of the word "crotch" in it. Try some synonyms.
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Title: Great Reviewed By: JdWheels [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: First Strawberry Panic on here. I love it. I have a few SP stories ready... I will take your lead. Thank you and perhaps.... go back and expand on this( I can see just where it would go, but it is not up to me, but you as the author.
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