| "the need" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing wrong with the story is the whole spelling and grammar part, it's a little hard to read. Maybe you should try using capitals and punctuation and other things.
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 07:55 CST
Comment/Review:
haha, funny, but why are those chapters so small.
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Reviewed By: Ebony_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yay! ^-^ thanks a bunch for the changes! I'm sorry about when you AIM'ed me, I wasn't at the computer at the time. I leave it on during the day, i know I need to work on it...>>; curse my lazyness... But yeah I'll hopefully talk to you next time!
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Reviewed By: Ebony_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story sounds really interesting and I would really like to continue it, but could you please add things like " " for when someone is talking and maybe some spacing and more words? I think it would make a big improvement for the story! ^-^ anyways good luck!
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