| "Step-parent Saiyan Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 13, 2007 04:02 CDT
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If Raditz was keen to adjust his apartment to set up a room for Fermi and Bohr, how will he be when it comes to setting up a room for the babies.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 07, 2007 19:35 CDT
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I was wondering, if Raditz admitted to Gohan about the beatings he had to inflict on Vegeta and Nappa to beat out the evil tendancies, shouldn't someone tell Bulma?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 05, 2007 04:22 CDT
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Hopefully Raditz will be able to tell Gohan his side of the story while he was in HFIL to show that he's already been "punished".
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 02, 2007 04:49 CDT
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Hey, if you managed to write a chapter of Stellari and ChiChi mending fences, what would one for Raditz and gohan be like?!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 27, 2007 19:23 CDT
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That was cool, can't wait to see Raditz's reaction once they pull out of the bond.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 14, 2007 22:21 CDT
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I remember reading in a DBZ mag that Vegeta is a married man and that they would've had a private little ceremony during the seven year period Goku was in Otherworld. I'm interested to see how you would challenge yourself with that one.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 10, 2007 01:19 CST
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LOL!!! If their wedding had this much drama, I can't wait to see how Yamcha reacts to Raditz's decision to bring the twins out of his dojo to train them himself. That was brilliant!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 22, 2007 17:04 CST
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I'm interested to see what pivitol memory Stellari has to encounter to help Raditz when it comes to her turn in the mind bond. Great work.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 12, 2007 17:37 CST
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Well done on the update. It's nice to see them finally work together on this. I feel a tad emabrassed about being the only one reviewing this side story, but I guess in your point-of-view as the writer it's better than none. LOL.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 07, 2007 19:21 CST
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Cool update. I wonder if Stellari read the passage in the bible that said that if the husband (and in some cases the wife) were the unbeliever of their partners beliefs and yet they were agreeable to remaining with their spouses and understood their roles in the marriage accordingly, the union can still work. So even if Raditz fines some aspects of Stellari's beliefs odd, she can still teach him something by her actions.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 06, 2007 21:46 CST
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That was great!!! The book of Revelation is a hard book to understand because it it very symbolic, and it would be nice to see Raditz finally open up his mind to Stellari through their bond about each other's pasts.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 17, 2007 18:32 CST
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That was fine, interested to read Raditz's reaction to Fermi's little slip-of-the-tounge incident. And Stellari's reaction to finding out about all the history books spralled accross the floor.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 15, 2007 17:14 CST
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Is the time the family were out at the saiyan hunting lodge, the first time Raditz got to train the boys? Also, when does Stellari have that talk with the boys about whether or not they want to address Raditz as their daddy? The idea of Raditz refurbishing his apartment to accommidate the family was cool.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 14, 2007 20:56 CST
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Don't you mean chapter 38? I checked it out.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 14, 2007 20:27 CST
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It's a cool start, keep going.
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