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Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2017 12:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a JJ fan or hater. I thrive on Dee/Ryo and Bastard Rose/Ryo. I
picked this up because of another Drake/JJ fic was good so I was
like, 'what the hey. I'll give Jj-with-depth' another go. Read you
and BOOM. Favorited. Great job with the characters without
demasculating them - very important. The flow the flow---! Smooth
and reasonable. No plot holes observed but I did just binge read.
Much enjoyed. Will read again.
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Reviewed By: Cissin On: November 15, 2007 15:15 PST
Comment/Review:
I love your fiction! Please write more!!! ;D
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Reviewed By: Ladymynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! You have officially made me a Drake and J.J. fan as my heart normally belongs to Dee and Ryo. Thanks for pointing this out to me. There was a natural progession in their relationship. The story would have lost something if Drake and JJ had gotten together too quickly. You made it believable for example by showing Drake at first denying his feelings and then finally coming to accept them -- not totally (because that would have been a stretch) but realizing -- "Hey maybe I should take a look at this thing with J.J." And those cliffhangers -- very intense which made me want to keep reading. It takes talent to pull those off. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel and anything else of yours I find.
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Reviewed By: Stara On: June 13, 2007 20:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's one of the best stories featuring JJ and Drake that I've ever read. I'm hoping you're planning a sequel!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: May 14, 2007 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...this is YamiPenguin from lj. I'm reviewing this like you asked in your e-mail. Loved this fanfic! But-*kicks Drake* WTF?! Getting drunk and going home with a stranger isn't the best way to start a relationship! *shakes head* Not surprising the relationship didn't last! I saw Ted in Like, Like Love, he was peeved on not being able to find Drake and JJ. He mentioend they were avoiding him. I can see Drake sulking but what's with JJ? *nearly dies* I say Drake's expression was priceless! *highly amused* I could have swore JJ looked evil when he was done kissing Drake. I already loved the pairing of Drake and JJ, so the kiss wasn't a shock to me. I dunno on the other readers through...By the way-PLEASE update 'Loves company soon!'
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Reviewed By: mi-chan08 On: March 07, 2007 18:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha that wAS GREAT!!!hehehe i tink jjs getting a little horny LOL!!!;D
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Reviewed By: mi-chan08 On: March 07, 2007 17:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was AWSUME!!!!hehehe i know you i now you*singsogny anime chibi voice*...dee and ryo sittn in a tre e....mwahaha doing something WAY MORE than kissing*eveil chibi grin and mischevioustwinkle in eyes*hehehe
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Reviewed By: dubhghall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 13:48 PST
Comment/Review:
I finally caught up on my (fanfiction)reading and yours was the first story on my to-do-list (your reviews made me very curious ^^). And I really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked the rather slow pace of it and how you portrayed J.J. and Drake. I was a bit disappointed, though, that you left it where you did. The ending practically screams *sequel* and I hope that you're already writing one. ;) I'd really like to see how you continue your story.
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Title: YES!!!!
Reviewed By: FoxCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 17:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yesyesyesyesyes!!! more!!! the ending made me hyper yesyesyesyesyes! ^_^ you have a habit of making me hyper (and making me sad when you hurt the bishes T.T) but you rock and a sequel to this would be like the bestest thing in the world!!!! and quite possibly make my freinds hunt you down because you made me hyper and they have to deal with me ^_^
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Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 13:27 PST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm....over huh....no lemon sex scene for JJ and Drake?...bummer...*sips on her rum and coke*...No Akita you cannot have a drink, too young...but Ill make you a virgin Pina Coloda....catti
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Reviewed By: Anskip On: February 26, 2007 12:26 PST
Comment/Review:
I must admit I'm a little disappointed. There was such a built up to Drake and JJ finally facing their feelings for each other, and then Drake walks off with some woman and the epilogue is nothing but a re-telling of Like, Like, Love. I would have loved to see you give Drake and JJ a story of your own, some personal twist and hopefully a happy end, too. :( I'm hoping for a sequel though, and hope there'll be more of what you've shown in the first 18 chapters of this story. It was a story of your own, very well written and nicely plotted. It would have been so nice to see you give it an end you've plotted yourself, too.
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Title: ....Sequel? Please?
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 21:20 PST
Comment/Review:
....SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!! I loooooooooove you! You update so fast and your chapters are always so good (and as short as mine are, so I don't feel stupid) and I WANT DRAKE/JJ FLUFF!!! Pweeeeeeaaaaaaase?
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Reviewed By: DRF On: February 24, 2007 18:20 PST
Comment/Review:
Very nice! Do you post on other archives too? Hope to see an update soon! And hell, depending on the outcome of this one of course, a sequel would be great! Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:34 PST
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Grabs Akita, twirls her around, sequel, sequel, sequel..YEAH....I like that word....giggles....want sequel that way Subu-chan and Akita-kun will not leave me all alone..they will still be here to keep me company...YEAH...so alone without Akita-kun and Subu-chan...they are my only friends...*wipes tears away*...must have sequel so that they will not abandon me....catti
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 21:21 PST
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Hey girlfriends....just me here reviewing like I should...I truely love this story...but then at this time I have just finished half a bottle of gin and am feeling quite good...not sugar cookie high good but drunk and disoriented good...the brown paper bag is handed off to Akita...take it and do something with it...burps...hicuups...turns slightly green..maybe I drank too much...catti
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 20:38 PST
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Oh sure...make it sound lke every one has some one on Valentines day...not me...all alone...no boyfriend, no husband, no girlfriend...just another no nonense day...nothing special...just watched all of the coworkers get flowers and candy and special treats by their mates...nope nothing...oh well...hell...maybe its for the best...my son turned 15...thats what I look forward too until he decides Im not worthy and dont even have that to celebrate...catti
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Reviewed By: DRF On: February 14, 2007 15:24 PST
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Hey, when are you gonna update again? I really like this story a lot so far! I hope we'll see more of it soon! :)
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Title: Ai MacLean
Reviewed By: FoxCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliff hanger!!!!! T.T PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease updaate soon!!!!!!! T.T PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePle asePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 12:47 PST
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*slips Akita a brown paper bag*...two cliffies for two chapters...thats soooo evil...*passes plastic bag of cotton candy to Akita*...Poor Drake getting the shit end again....MAN....Like the whole dream segment...thought I missed a chapter or something...*opens can of Mt Dew, passes it to Akita*...Darn now we are going to have wait another week...Oh well it gives me time to stock up on some stuff...laughs...catti
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Title: NOT COOL!
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:05 PST
Comment/Review:
....NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOO! ....No. *shakes head* Did I mention NO?! DRAKE MUST LIIIIIIIIIVE!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS NOT SAFE TO PLAY WITH MY EMOTIONS THIS CLOSE TO SINGLES AWARENESS DAY!!! ....*turns off Caps Lock key*
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:16 PST
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Subu-chan that was amazing...love cliffies...oops there goes Drake and the perp...damn 13 floors with no bungee rope...*smirks*...Hey Akita...doesnt that sound like fun...it would be like free-falling...kinda like falling off of your sugar high....*Psst, Akita, I know where there is a bed with really high ceilings that we can jump on...wanna go?....catti
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