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| "Qual" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Anonymous-san On: May 18, 2007 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No loli-poon for you tonight, Basakaa!
| Reviewed By: ShadowFox0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, that was oddly enjoyable. You definitely carried an original idea and can see where support for it would be drawn, fiction or not. Ilyas personality seems to be mostly on the money with a few discrepancies, but that doesn't keep it from being an enjoyable read none the less. Berserker's rather silent and casual attitude makes sense as well, so i think you planned things out rather correctly. So basically, great job for a one shot.
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