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"Makoto's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Angel  On: March 09, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You spell off wrong in the frist chapter. But I love it. Write some to it.
 Reviewed By: obsidian [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I noticed you posted this story up recently so I sat down and read it. Now that I have time, that is. I really liked it. Makoto's reactions and thoughts were very realistic. You write her very well. ^__^ I have trouble with the inner scouts. I don't know them quite as well as the outers, although the majority of Sailor Moon revolves around them more. *shrugs* Anyway, this is was really great. I think the ending is fine the way it is. It doesn't say too much or too little. It makes the reader begin to wonder about what could happen. Over all, kudos to you. ^_^

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