| "Trigger" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Saiou-chan On: May 24, 2007 16:48 CDT
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Ooooo, I love this! You got something good here, keep up the good work. I greatly look forwerd to your next update. Sasuke is so much in character in here, I love the way your portraying everyone, even I couldn't have done better. ^^ Be proud, you've done good.
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Reviewed By: rinjin On: April 04, 2007 07:10 CDT
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this is awesome!! keep it comin!
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 23:23 CST
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It's really interesting, i can't wait to see what happens. Totally didn't expect something like this, yo got my full attention
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your opinion on flames XD I don't think I've ever written a flame before, out of like the 1000 reviews I've given out on here and ff.net ^_^ Anwho, I LOVE IT!! Seriously! It's completely original (well I've never read anything like it before), and very well-written. And I'm glad you put that last chapter in Hinata's point of view. Her feelings make much more sense when she, in a sense, explains it herself :D At least there was some SasuNaru in the first chapter to get things a bit warmer XD PLEASE CONTINUE! SORRY FOR LEAVING SUCH A LONG REVIEW!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INTERESTING.... VERY INTERESTING. LOVE THE WAY SASUKE ACTS, REALLY HOT too bad he likes Naruto *tear*. I'M REALLY LIKING THE STORY HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (forgot 2 sign in) On: January 22, 2007 12:07 CST
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hmmm... sasuke killing the hokage, i can picture that. lol. update soon, i wanna c who else will side w/ him.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, I can honestly say I've never read anything like that, so kudos for originality! I love where this is heading, 'hostile takeover' indeed =D 'Til next time
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so dark and scary but I like and want the best for Naruto and Sasuke(squeal!!)
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 21, 2007 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderfully written, totally stole my attention, cant wait to see what happends next
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:41 CST
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interesting. i lyk it. i hope u update soon.
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