| "Yes, Master" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 06:12 CST
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Mmmm thank you for the yummy deliciousness! Lol and the end was hillarious! One should never ask questions that they don't truly want to know the answers too! But of course where would the fun in that be!
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Reviewed By: toyed On: January 31, 2007 19:33 CST
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lol, what a declious story. Reminds me of Akuma's infamous "Enslaving Heero" epic and Blue Soarings famous (and extremely devious and well written) "Steel", lol. Excellent job on portraying bdsm first-times and even catching the emotional aspect of Heero's personality. Update soon! ^____^
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Heero the "master" and Duo the "slave". Not that original since we see Heero as seme but this is...WOW!!! Something new yet old. I like it!! Interesting too!! I don't know how you do it!! So many fics and they're all great!!! Maybe we should see one with Duo as "master" and Heero as "slave" or maybe that fantasy about shaving. ;) You never know!!
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Reviewed By: Yume Kai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only read this first chapter but so far I love it. I look forward to finishing this story.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 02:58 CST
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Curse you for ending so soon!!! Please update!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 18:27 CST
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Haha ^_^ I love it very realistic, which is something I often find in your writing. Can't wait for the next Chap!
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Reviewed By: Masterofyoursoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good ^_^ please continue writing it, I never could get bored with a slave Duo.
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 13:51 CST
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Oh my! This is so hot, it's off the scale!! I adore Heero's loving but firm handling of Duo. Please continue ^^
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:44 CST
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Mmmmm! Too damn sexy! Heero in leather and Duo as his slave. Please I want more of this yummy deliciousness!
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