| "Secretes withing the Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon... it took to long last time, two months too long.. well cant wait, to see what you have coming...
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! the end was hilarious, lol he fell off the bed! i could picture it in my mind and it was pretty funny! great chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chappie really funny...cant wait till you update...
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 00:52 CDT
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So now Naraku has Kagome's little sister. That's frightening. What a horrible dream she had! (At least, the first part of it ...) Shame on Kurama and Botan laughing at them like that -- and taking pictures!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 16:35 CST
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I loved this chappie so much I reviewed twice... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon..please with hiei on top..lol...well i love this chapter and i cant wait till you update.......
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, I cant wait to read what is so amazing, well pleaseeeeeee update soon....
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Reviewed By: Azera_Vader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 15:33 CST
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Hey i remeber something a little like this, do you by any chance know what I'm talking about I would appreciate it if you could email me about it, at azera@comcast.net thanks.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 02:19 CST
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Ah! Nice of you to put up another chapter even though you're so busy! And please forgive me, but I had to laugh while reading your A/N -- you have you own personal HOJO. LOL! Post when you can!
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Title: I love that story!!
Reviewed By: X-x-X-Bloodbath-X-x-X [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i love the story, you should write more, i want to see what happens between Hiei and Kagome. PLZ WRITE MORE!?!?!?!? ^_^
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon..please with hiei on top..lol...well i love this chapter and i cant wait till you update.......
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 10:39 CST
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Hmmm. Hiei's getting a little cocky, isn't he? that mind-reading ability sure gives him the advantage, doesn't it? I'm actually glad you had her come in second instead of winning the contest. Liked Miroku's reincarnation. The detectives didn't argue with Sesshoumaru? and what kind of makeover is Rin thinking for Kagome? Will she be going in to see Koenma soon? Will Hiei keep following her around? Keep going with this!! Good luck with your other writings, too! (I'm trying real hard not to laugh -- I'm a history professor -- don't hate me!!)
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm What will you do next I love this story so Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:20 CST
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Interesting choices of songs for the contest. Sess and Rin, huh? And kurama's the one being the hardass about taking her in to Spirit World. Gee, wonder how it's all going to go down after the contest? I can see a nice big knock-down, drag-out with kag, Sess, and Rin taking on the SDs -- that could be funny. Or, will Hiei intercept Kag? Looking forward to finding out!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice
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Title: good!! XD
Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:52 CST
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i luv this story!!! and plz update soon!!!
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