| "I Am Battousai" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 22:04 CDT
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OH NO!! ♠ she can't make him leave so soon! one hopes she comes to her senses. she should realize that if she gets 'satisfaction' then she looses him... one can even get more happiness/satisfaction out of giving than receiving so... she should just stop!! ♣ okay, nice story, one thing: watch your malapropisms (sound similar but mean different things- than & then, bread & breed) and homophones (sound the same, spelled differently mean different things- aloud & allowed, there & their, bare & bear, threw & through). the examples i noted are some of the misused words in your story. ♦ i beta read for many authors and i recommend they look up the words i point out to them. i suggest to them to download a dictionary at~ wordweb[dot]info ~ all you have to do is highlight a word and click the 'wordweb' icon on the toolbar and a window opens up with the definition. or you can look them up at dictionary[dot]com ♠ really good story but it is jarring when you're reading along and stumble across the wrong word. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Title: Author's Note (temporary Chapter 6)
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*beats head against wall waiting for the next chapter* I emailed tons of ideas to you! Please please please put out the next chapter, LOL! This wait is killing me!
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Title: I am Battousai
Reviewed By: Bree McGregor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is that it?? it said complete but it doesn't feel like it! Did they break it? does he leave? YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:29 CDT
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Nice idea for a fic, good angst. It reminds me of a book by Sherrilyn Kenyon kinda, this is good stuff.
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:31 CDT
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i think hes in love with her and is beginging to realize it. wonder what happends when he gets mortal and to live his life again.
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Title: I am Battousai
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GODS! I'm ANXIOUSLY awaiting the update to this story!!! It's fantastic and highly original! Please post soon!
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Reviewed By: PersianRurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait you can't be serious!! its over!!! omg great story but i wish it would continue!! loved your writing.
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