| "Sasuke's first SOUND punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, ever gonna update? THe story is good, if pervy as hell. It is worth reading, if you ever decide to update. Neh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: omg ily
Reviewed By: ritsukaisnotloveless [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DO YOU ONLY HAVE 5 REVIEWS?!?! i love this story so much! i read it once and lost the title i almost started crying. YAY IM SO GLAD I FOUND IT AGAIN ilyilyilyily
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Reviewed By: tatsel1392 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 12:18 CDT
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that was absolutely incredible! i hope there are many more chapters to come... i love how the story shows what really goes on in the sound. and sasuke is finally in his element as uke; it is so lame that there are so so many sasunaru fics... there needs to be a ton more orosasu, because it's just SO hot!!! i love how kabuto had a big part in the plot too; he just isn't included enough. but anyway, excellant work!
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Reviewed By: aeric lover On: July 31, 2007 15:21 CDT
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Wow that was intense. I cant wait to read more and i hope you will update soon. You are an excellent reader.
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Reviewed By: lyoung On: May 05, 2007 09:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Glad you decided to add another chapter. thanks
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Reviewed By: Tessa_K On: February 12, 2007 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very hot story, although I found the idea of putting the recruits under such extreme regiment for their first year and then similar conditions for at least 5 years until they become Cheunin a bit far fetched. After all, the men who perform the punishment on them need to regain some stamina too, right? Unless Orochimaru owns a legion of studs? :D
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Reviewed By: lyoung On: January 23, 2007 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fyi Chapter 3 doesn't show up until you click on to read chapter 2 so if someone looks at the story say from just the first page they don't see that the story has actually continued on. Please continue writing. I am enjoying this story.
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