| "Lost Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Lotus1 On: December 10, 2008 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! i love the idea of Kagome dominating Sesshomaru. LOL I like how you described him trying to deny that he wanted her. Can't wait to read more!!! Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Update soon please!
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Title: Lost innocence
Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 On: August 04, 2007 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its ok you should realy try to update soon .
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Title: very hot good update
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the new chapter very hot i love your story your such a damn good writer the sex scene was intense it is so funny how he can't get it out of his head i can't wait to find out what he does to kagome next very interesting please update soon one of your biggest fans Inuyashalover161 *hugs you* Brillant!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 00:04 CDT
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Poor Sesshy....hehe...He is like dieing because of his pride.....lol.....poor guy..hehe....Next chapter this is funny....hehe...Nyuka
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Title: wicked story
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome update soon please i want to read more thanks your big fan
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Reviewed By: SANDRAK On: February 23, 2007 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more.
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Reviewed By: Lady.Chocolat On: February 04, 2007 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, but there's just one problem with it.. You stopped posting at adultfanfiction.net and I jus can´t find it anymore..and really, I NEED to read the rest of it :D You are a great author, and I'm too dissapointed with adultfanfiction.net; I'm not registered in the site,and because of that I can't give the authors feedback..and let's face it, it's unfair. Please continue this fic, and if you read this review and wants to send a chapter of the fic ( I don't know, maybe you are a great author who loves your reviewers and would do anything to make them happy \o hehe),or even just answer it, my email is lady.chocolat@hotmail.com looking forward to reading it, Lady :**
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 18:42 CST
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Oh wow! I just loved the fight play, especially since I'm a true action whore. That's my name. The ending paragraph, was a great close. I can see how being dominated could be an aphrodisiac. Great job!....Snow
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Reviewed By: LCAR313 On: January 17, 2007 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY i love it sess the bitch, i never thought of it amazing update soon.
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Reviewed By: Diva On: January 17, 2007 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very original plot here. I like the way Kagome turned the table him. It´s a very nice and promising start. Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 09:39 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG loved it. i lov how u made this not like any of those other storys like they fought and it turned into sumthin else that was kool. OOO what well happen to kags once sess gets bored OMG! cant wait wat will inu do(like he would care, but hey its his bro shes doin)? ok i loved it so ill get friends to read it k
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Reviewed By: Punk Rocker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 00:46 CST
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I love this story and I hope that you will continue to write it. I am anticipating the future chapters.
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