| "1 Black Rose out of 99 Red" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 09:57 CDT
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good work sis but i thought u were grounded oh well luv ya sis kk
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 15:42 CDT
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update now come on ash i know ur always on the computer so update
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:49 CDT
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that was pretty good just needs more detail! and longer paragraphs and it would be really good!!!! update k!
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 10:27 CST
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update update update ur on the computer always so update. your sis kk
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:45 CST
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update pls sis (puppy dog eyes) any way as my bro dark lord said its good but the clummpy paragraphs have to stop your sis kk
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Title: Teioke Sheay
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh...... I guess it wasn,t that bad. I mostly liked it but I got tired of reading all of the she replied and he anwsered but Darky Lord down their is absoultley right I agree with everything -he?- said. Clumpy paragraphs, I hate them! Though my work is not the best either,Bye!
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 10:19 CST
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hey sis good story u got more reviews than i do your sis kayla kaiba
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 18:23 CST
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potential, great potential.... you show, as of yet, untapped potential.... you need to watch for grammatical errors, a few spelling mistakes, and formating... but on the whole, it's a very enjoyable fiction and i will see as to how you use that potential... what you will become, as an author, will be something worth seeing.... the only major problem i had was that you used the "lump-everything-into-one-paragraph" format, and it makes my eyes hurt, trying to see which line comes after another.... i know i used that format in my review, but am usedto using it in my reviews... hopefully you will not find my rambling too unimportant.... have a nice day/night
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ash your storys awsome. your sis kk
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Reviewed By: KenzPotter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:22 CST
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omg i love it!!!! its really good. keep writting.
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