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Reviewed By: SummerRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2012 13:47 EDT
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Sorry to hear about your mother |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 20:00 EDT
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this is a great story so far, i hope you update it soon
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great!!! On a more somber note, I am sorry to hear about your mother, I hope that she is doing better. I am adding this stories to my favourites so I can know when it updates, take your time and spend it with your mom and getting your job etc. sorted out... heh, I'm just coming back to my story after 2 and a half years...
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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows(nsi) On: August 20, 2007 17:18 EDT
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i know how it is, as members of my family are cancer survivors and one died of cancer recently, you have my condolences and my well wishes... good luck and im not saying update soon since this trial is energy consuming but your mother will be in my prayers
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 22:17 EDT
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I know how you must feel. i just lost my grandmother to ovarian cancer. i pray you have better luck than we did and your mom is ok. now school shouldn't be horrible if your a senior. i'm just heading into college myself and i had more trouble seeing my grandmother once every two weeks than i did in school. be proud you haven't given up on your stories.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 05:17 EDT
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NO!!! You must UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Krytal234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I like it. so would you update it. I know you said thrice in a month so please!
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Title: Well Colour Me Surprised
Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I was getting your reviews, I didn't know you also wrote one of the fics I found really interesting. Hehe... I hope you continue with your fic soon though. *grin*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 03:44 EDT
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Wow! Great chapter! I really loved it that you had Koenma put that bracelet on him -- nice touch. It really seems like something they would do. Interesting about Kurama taking up with a bunch of ningen girls, -- but, um, why the hell were he and Hiei talking about youki and Reikai and all that IN FRONT OF HER?!!? Wouldn't she have been flipping out? And won't Kurama have to wipe her memory now? I like the idea that Kagome and Souta need Hiei to donate some youki during their transformation. And it was interesting that her mother has priestess powers. She must be very strong to have been able to track down Hiei and Kurama and Yusuke like that. I'm not sure if I quite understood how she got there, though, -- she passed through something that put her at the apartment building? Um, is the shrine within 2 miles? I hope so! Is Yusuke going to follow him? Interesting that Hiei asked Kagome's mother to keep Kurama and Yusuke away. So, he isn't planning to tell them about his mate? I have a feeling our favorite little fire demon is about to get into some trouble, isn't he? And we still haven't seen inuyasha yet for him to find out. Hee hee hee! I can't wait!! And I'm looking forward to some more Hiei/Kag goodness! Thanks so much for updating this story -- it's great!
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Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! But you left us at a cliffhanger! PLease update soon!
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Title: The Engagement
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: you're not finished yet!
Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love it so far dont discontinue please!! please up date as soon as you can! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 11:55 EDT
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lol... I can't wait to find out how Yusuke and the others react when they find out about Kagome and Hiei being together!! Update soon, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the story line keep going! Although you said it was redone the first chapter still has a bit of verb confusion. The rest of the chapters are fine though. Hope you update soon.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: gv On: April 09, 2007 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very evry very good update reallll fast!!! cant wait 2 read it!!!!
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