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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 22:52 EDT
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Hee hee hee!! That was GREAT!! Hiei can't bring himself to show a little respect for Kagome's family? Oh, they're going to have problems, aren't they? Love the way she met up with Keiko and ended up at the carnival with her and Yusuke and Kurama. I guess she had masked her scent somewhat so they didn't smell Hiei on her, huh? Loved the idea that he messed with the Haunted House!! And that she went after him. I'm guessing they had a little argument upstairs, huh? I enjoyed Hiei's thoughts about Kurama standing too close to her -- heh heh!! What a shame Hiei interrupted their fun at the carnival. Will they go looking for them now? That was a fun chapter!! I know you're really busy with life and other stories, too, but thanks so much for updating this one!!
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Reviewed By: HimeJunHi On: March 22, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now......... what WILL he do........?
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 23:05 EDT
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you have them backwards
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 02:39 EST
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Just read this again -- I'm still hoping you will expand it. I'd love to have all those questions it raises answered. #1 being how she came to be betrothed to Hiei in the first place? (Yep. It still sounds like Hiei to me.) What made him decide to go ahead and be with her before they're "married?" (Not that she's complaining any, and neither are we! Heh heh!) Does Hiei know about Inuyasha? About her going to the past? What does he think about it? I really hope you add on to this one -- soon!! You've got me hooked on this idea!
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Reviewed By: midnight lost child24 On: February 25, 2007 17:55 EST
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Hope you make a sequel.
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: February 22, 2007 20:10 EST
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is it youko(kurama)oh i hope it is please write more please!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 16:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Wow, I'd like to see more. I'm hoping on Hiei as well. It would be great to see what happens between Kagome's mate to be and Inuyasha if he were to come thru the well.
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Reviewed By: VB On: January 26, 2007 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
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You need to go back and check spelling because at certain points its really hard to follow. However I loved it and am going to assume its Hiei. She is in her own time so unless you're righting one where Kurama is Yoko only 'softer' from living as a human it can't be him and I can't imagine Yusuke being that instinct oriented not to mention your other fics seem to be Hiei/Kag.
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Reviewed By: xFluffiesGirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story i'm guessing the demon kagome is engaged to is hiei right?
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 00:55 EST
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loved it my guess its hiei right, but i might b rong plz update
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it hei chan right please tell me i am right!!!!I don't think it is yuske, but it might be shess but I want it to be hei oooh it might be yoko he would be a good choise.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it hei chan right please tell me i am right!!!!I don't think it is yuske, but it might be shess but I want it to be hei oooh it might be yoko he would be a good choise.
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:59 EST
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this ok but what is the guys name?
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 03:14 EST
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i thought it was good with the exception of not saying who he was.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 00:50 EST
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Okay, that was just wicked! How could you NOT name her betrothed? (Of course, I know who I think/HOPE it is!) I thought you did a fine job with the intimate parts, and this makes a good one-shot, though you really did a good job of leaving it open to expand. (I would REALLY like to see more of it! Interesting plot -- especially since she's already BEEN with her mate-to-be. Questions like: what kind of half-demon is she? Why the concealment? How did she come to betrothed to ___? *I really hope it's Hiei.* What will Inuyasha's reaction be? She seemed to think Inu might have feelings for her. Yes, I can see a good story growing from this.) Anyway, enjoyed it! And I'm looking forward to more of "Just Another Story" -- love that one! Thanks for sharing this with us!
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