| "Real Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Karen78 On: October 07, 2011 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed most of this fic, although I did find it unnecessarily meandering. Editing is the best skill a writer can have, imho. The lemon was very well done; kudos on that. The end lost me though. It was just so melodramatic and cheesy that I laughed out loud, completely taking me away from the mood and story of the fic as a whole. |
Title: :'(
Reviewed By: Shedra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As far as writing goes, it's really well done. The characters are presented as they are in the series and none of the dialauge seems out of place. If Kubo was going to make these two gay for eachother, then this is how he would have done it.-- However the ending was depressing. I like to think of myself as manly and I don't wanna break down in tears over a fanfiction. Especially when I'm looking for smut rather than an emotional journey.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 02:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was, for lack of a better word, scary. the end made me feel sad for ishida... but happy at the same time because he was with ichigo in the sad place.
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Reviewed By: Aoi Hebi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, that was beautiful. I was just cruising for a PWP, but then I stumbled across this and . . . just wow. It's so pretty and hot and sad, all mixed up into a wonderful oneshot. I really enjoyed this, thank you!
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 11:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with E~wind.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. The progression from rivals to lovers seemed very natural; at least, as natural as could be expected in a place like that. Very hot. Great work!
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