| "Recollections" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blissfully retarded. And i mean that in a good way.
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Title: *giggles*
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The character's "past lives" were really well done but it seemed kind of typical to have Reno and Rude as former gang members (even if in different gangs)...still good though. My favorite part in your story was Tseng's mission. His being so proud over finding the item was brilliant! The end of the story was funny as well when it was up to Reno to tell his story. The ratings I gave you were 10s because I did not find any mistakes. My only complaints are that it moved a little slowly but it's perfectly understandable for the type of story and it was so short-other then that I loved it and I have added it to my favorite's list. Thank you so much for sharing your work! Very nice job!
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Reviewed By: macbrooks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 12:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute story; good punchline - never saw it coming. Elena initially was completely against joining the Investigation Department, although this canon may have been tweaked in Before Crisis (I'm not totally up on the game yet).
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