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| "Ranma the Ghost Rider" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: anthony883 On: August 04, 2010 13:28 CDT
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Nice idea crossing a marvel charicter as twisted as the Ghost Rider with an anime charicter with a life as screwed up as Ranma. Please update soon. P.S. please have Ranma give Happosai the pendance stare I would love to see how much pain it would inflict on him concidering how many people he has harmed.
| Reviewed By: noodlemonster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 14:46 CST
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it's a pretty original crossover but you really need to do some work on your writing style. you describe almost every action, and only use the most simplistic words for it. ex: nobody cares if nabiki got off the bike first. or: when ranma tells kasumi, you just basically tell the reader he told her, and then the tendos come in????? first off, you never actually explained how there can be more GRs, nor did you explain ranma's tale, and then you just all of a sudden have ranma start explaining things to people he just met, even though he wants to keep it a secret?
| Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 22:53 CDT
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Hmm. Interesting idea... in fact, it's somewhat along the lines of an idea I'd had about merging the Ranmaverse with ol' Fireskull. Ghost Rider's always been one of my favorite comic antiheroes, and after seeing the movie I did ponder an idea like this. Only, my concept went along somewhat different lines and I haven't actually written anything(suffering from author burnout). Personally, I feel the concept of merging several anime casts at the same time you're tinkering with the primary character(say, having Sailor Senshi, Saiyans, goddesses, or all of the above enter the storyline) is a bit old. I've seen it done so many times, it tends to turn me away from fanfics if I see those usual titles in the source heading. I typically try to stick to one base anime if I can- but hey, it's your story, you write it however the muse moves you. I would recommend you keep a close eye on punctuation and grammar, just as a suggestion. Aside from that it looks like you've got an interesting story here. If I ever get around to my own GR idea(that's a BIG if, mind you, I'm still on fanfic sabbatical), I hope you'll check it out.
| Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 17:37 CDT
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Normally, its the Outer Senshi that make hasty decisions before acting, not the Inners. Also, need a pre-reader?
| Reviewed By: Final Knightmare On: March 01, 2007 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite enjoyable. I'd like to see what happens with the senshi so keep it up. It looks to be a good Fic.
| Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sometimes hard to find decent crossover fanfiction that doesn't destroy the characters. Hope to see more soon
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