| "Heart Of a Monkey King" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 15:18 CDT
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G/S is such a fun couple. Thanks for writing such an awesome fic. Keep up the good work! :)
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:37 CDT
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Loved it!!!! Goku left. Wonder how Sanzo gonna react to that when he woke up? Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: A.J On: May 12, 2008 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was a kick ass fic so far. I definately encourage you to continue. I'll be watching to see if you do!
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Reviewed By: DarkladyD2003 On: July 24, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sanzo never stood a chance!
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Reviewed By: Car Jack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 22:17 CDT
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My apologies for the difficulty in chapter 6 not registering the paragraph breaks. I guess this teaches me to check my posts after I upload them. *face palm* Thank you, Jedagia, for bringing it to my attention.
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 20:58 CDT
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Thanks for the reload. You're awesome. By the way, the reason I want you to reload is because I printed it out & reread it over & over again. Sanzo & Goku are SO CUTE!!!
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Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 07:18 CDT
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Ano...the story is good but can you reload it again for easy reading. Love it.
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Title: Heart of amonkey king
Reviewed By: gerigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love all the stories i've read from car jack thus far. Ihavent really been looking for grammar spelling and everything if there is some miss spelling once i've read the story i will realise that maybe a word or two might be misspelt but i basicalli know ehat the writer was saying so i don't pay that much attention because the overall stories a really great reading to me. i read other stories on other sites from this writer and like i said i really love all of them anyway. now as far as this chapter goes i love what i have read and i will be reading from chapter 1-6 all over again from beging to the newest chapter just posted keep up the brilliant cj keep them coming. from possibly one of your most biggest readers out here in fiction land. gerigirl ps i would like to know if i need your input for a story i would like to post would you be so kind as to give advice on what type of format would be most useful as to get a reader attention to continue reading my fiction once i post then eventually? i would really appreciate all the help i can get from writers already posting stories out here. thank you again for the beautiful stories that you put out here for all to enjoy many many thanks again.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 02, 2007 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's from me hands down, I thourolly *sp?* enjoyed this story and am dissapointed that theres only 5 chapters and not say 10 lol Definatly made a fan outta me, I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter ;p
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. You really have to feel for Goku and Sanzo. He wants Sanzo, but Sanzo is adamant about not giving into his own want for everyone's favorite monkey. **grins** And that kiss was HOT. I hope you update soon!
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