| "Fullmetal Alchemist: Revised Version" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: jullunI On: February 14, 2008 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I hope u'll update soon. :3 and I really love the EdWin pairing. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: WD Kiki On: July 04, 2007 01:12 CDT
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It took four parts to finish chapter nine- I find that hilarious. I'm really looking forward to your future chapters. I'm honestly always keeping an eye on this story- always watching for updates. Thank you for providing me with a well-written, interesting fanfiction. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Keep it up I'm enoying it.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 11:07 CDT
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That was one very interesting chapter- I was left wondering... do the plant fibers die in her body? I mean, they can't bend when they're dead, right? Sorry, just a question. I really love this fanfic- keep on with the updates. (By the way, thanks for the look into Ed's Point of Veiw, it was very helpful to the story)
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 16:35 CDT
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We've seen alot of Winry's feelings- do you mind showing us a little peek into Ed's? That would be interesting! =D I love what you have here, It's definatly interesting. Very well writen, to add. It's a story to be proud off. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice addition so Alphonse is related to Pinako then? Intreastng...he struck me as rather effeminate...heh. Looking forward to the next addition.
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Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great writing, and really quite orignal. The Winry and Ed pairing is really intreasting please continue this I wait for it eagerly.
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Reviewed By: 1.4 On: May 02, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a interesting fanfic!! Although I'd like to see some 503 moments soon...lol Keep up the good work!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Crimson Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 10:19 CDT
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*hearts for eyes* I really admire you now.. or maybe envy...(@.@) I spent countless times trying to find the perfect Ed/Winry story that wasn't too fluffy or didn't sound cheezy and I have to say; from what I know of the manga and the anime, I never thought about what it would be like if Winry were traveling with Ed. It's ingenious your really doing a good job pulling it off! keep up the good work, you got a new fan!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 On: March 01, 2007 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Keep it Up, I love this. You have definately come-up with an original... off of someone else's story... if that makes any sense. Anyways, I love what you've written so far and I think I get the entire making Winery more caring thing and really liked it. I would have given you a 12 or higher on the enjoyment factor, especially with the great little things you do to make it funny. I couldn't rate you on spelling and grammer because mine sucks and I didn't notice anything glareingly (see) bad so I think you're alright. I think I should stop now or I'll run out of room going through what I liked. Thanks and Please continue once you are able to =)
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can honetly say that I'v never given someone an actual Ten as an over all rating. you got it. My first ever Ten. GOOD JOB! I love it, keep on going with it. This is definatly going in one of my favourits. Really, if you could be a little less sick minded though... I'm so sure that Ed would LOVE to see a barbie doll strip. I dearly hope that your true to your word and that he WAS joking...Spelling and grammar is really the only thing I se wrong with this! It's great! could use some shining up, but over all- great!
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Reviewed By: laila On: January 23, 2007 00:42 CST
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ha this chapter was so funny! ed is so sneaky and devious and now a pervert! thats ok though i still love him keep up with this i am loving it! oh and what doll are you talking about i don't think i seen that one
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Reviewed By: tibblez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic its very original and stuff i like how u switched the roles and i love it!
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Reviewed By: pickabugtolove On: January 22, 2007 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right, 10 down the line! This is an excellent story, one like I've never seen, so please, keep it up! Right now I'm drawing a complete blank on Winry's body, but I'll keep thinkin'.
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