| "To Rut with a Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: playboyinyuasha On: February 09, 2009 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you can write a story.
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Title: To Rut with a Youkai
Reviewed By: housebunny On: February 09, 2009 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just saw the story and one word. HOT!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sexypanny On: November 15, 2008 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO HOT!!!!!! *phew. fanning face* I need to breathe. You had better start writing more girlfriend! Ur viewwers are sexually turned on!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I swear the temperature in my room just went up
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Title: He Cumed in her hair
Reviewed By: copycatter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HE CUMED IN HER HAIR!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELLL!!!!! But After all that its very good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 02:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I agree with the others... pretty damn hot. I do have to criticize, though, that it was a bit... spotty. You went straight from the lead-in to round ten, that is. Skipping rounds 2-9 would've been fine, but skipping round 1 seems to leave a bit out... Kagome's wtf reaction and the initial slight resistance to the point where she finally succumbs totally. Also, I notice you write lemon in 'porn movie' style. Unrealistic dialouge, that is, and a bit short on description. Still very good, and very hot. Not bad at all for a first-timer...
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!!!!! THAT WAS THE HOTTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!! It really turned me on! Excuse me, but I'm signing off to sexually attack my husband! Oh yes! Give yourself a BIG pat on the back~ byebye~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Allen Huang On: January 21, 2007 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! That was the hottest lemon I've ever read woman, write more... damn I've got a hard-on now, that really turned me on! xD
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Title: Oh dear!
Reviewed By: kamalakali [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:54 CST
Comment/Review:
::fans herself rapidly before falling into a dead faint::...::peeks out between her fingers, which are covering her heated face:: How naughty! How scandalous! Oh, dear...::grins:: You know I loved it! Who says girls can't enjoy raunchy literature? Not me! I especially loved the unique, ahem, breast scene. Very original. Kudos to you!
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Reviewed By: YashasGypsyRose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it straight 10! This fic was fun- feisty and highly erotic and I looooooooved loooved it!
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