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| "Contrl is an Illusion" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: honyou_hound [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying* Oh my god, that was so beautiful! So tragic but it seems like this is the only proper ending (as much as I hate death fics). That last poem was absolutely stunning, you are truly very talented. I hope you continue writing because you truly are gifted *big hug*. And the only reason I gave it a 5 for enjoyment is because it was not "fun", but it was gripping and intelligent. They should rephrase that category.
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Reviewed By: Takayu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* *sniff* How can you write this? I wouldn't have even been able to finish something like this. *cries again* It's like something from chicken soup for the soul
| Reviewed By: BradenIsMyMonkey On: March 06, 2007 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are very few stories that make me cry, and this is one of them. Me crying because of a story= It is a really, really, really, reallyx1243526352156109860516 good story. ^-^; I really liked those poems. Did you make them? I want to know, they are really good, especially the last one. I'm not into poems, that much, so I don't know anything...*wipes away a tear*
| Reviewed By: winry_rockbell274 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best and touching stories I have ever read. It is so sad, so REAL! I loved this story and I'm glad I've seen how it ends. Thank you for an awesome story that has kept me reading to the end!
| Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: kiwi711 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic was the first one that actually made me cry, not that it's a bad thing though. It was really good, even though it was short. I can't wait to read other fanfic you've written. Again, excellent work!
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