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| "The Master and the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Ok
Reviewed By: nayru088 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, you need to give a bit more! I was barely starting to get into the story! lol What did you mean when you said you wanted a 'beta'? And, what is AFF? @.@ How does he knows the names of the characters! *jealousy* lol Anyway, keep on the good work.
| Title: RxR...ing
Reviewed By: BloodPlay On: January 21, 2007 01:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I saw you left AFF and I was sad, yeah that site is unreliable XD...anyways, update please, I neeeeed to know what's gonna happen with David and Vegan...and Tory too, I hope he gets to keep him!...anyways, You rock and keep writing please ^^, Update alot :D
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