"Innocent Little L" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 10:26 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm not much of a yaoi fan, but this is really hot. I was a bit dissapointed that Misa didn't join in the fun. Oh well. Please continue the story. I know how horrible writer's block is, (I'm feeling it with my stories) but please don't stop there!!!
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Reviewed By: neverest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 18:59 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: quit teazing ur fans this is amazing please write more
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Title: Please hurry! Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 13:57 CDT Comment/Review: Oh my god!! You totally need tow rite more! I've been waiting forever to see the next chapter! I can't wait :)
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Reviewed By: RampageLawliet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 10:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is amazing, I can totally see it all :) Please continue the fic, i cant wait to see the rest of it!
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Reviewed By: senko09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 17:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hope to see a new chapter up soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 00:22 CDT Comment/Review: ^__^ Yay for updating!!!!!! Really really really can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!!! I can practically picture it.......... #^________________^# Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!! Want more!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't believe I made it to the third chapter... T_T; It was just so hard. I'm just not a big fan of het stuff... so, in response to your question, YES, I would LOVE to see yaoi. ^^; Nevertheless, the sex was pretty steamy; now Light needs to hop on. o_o; (Yeah, on L... duh.) Update soon, please! (=D
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 07:21 CST Comment/Review: ^_____^ Yay!!!!!! An update!!!!! Hehehe!!!! Personally, I don't mind if there's yaoi. It's up to you, since you're the one who's writing it. But it would be nice to see..... #^___^# Keep on writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dorchica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 05:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WAAAAH,cliffhanger!!! T.T Grrr...well,in my opinion,there should be no yaoi..you can find that anywhere!PLEASE,continue this fic!I can't wait to read more!I'm at the edge of my seat! =] ~Dorchica
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 19:35 CST Comment/Review: Me likey!!!!!!!!!! XD Glad you decided to write more on this fic!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Dorchica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 08:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story! XD Please continue!!!! DO NOT LEAVE US ON THIS CLIFFHANGER!
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 07:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely positively love it!!!!!!! Need more!!!!!!!! It's really good, even if you wrote it at four in the morning. ^__^ New chappie pwease!!!!!
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 20:55 CST Comment/Review: hehe i like it please continue
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