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Reviewed By: Shariganhater86 On: July 07, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic while i wish it would've gone longer i know it couldn't so good job if you get the chance please read my story and tell me what you think it is titled Rage of the Ranmyaku i like having more experienced authors giving me thier opinions it helps alot so keep up the good work ja nee
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Reviewed By: hunterlism On: June 27, 2007 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love these kinds of stories! but hey! can you make an uzumaki incest? like naruto and his older sister(OC) (i know im a perv but i can't resist!
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Reviewed By: hunterlism On: June 27, 2007 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love these kind of stories! but hey can you make an uzumaki incest? naruto and his older sister(OC) (i know im a perv but i can't resist)
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Reviewed By: pie_loving_gaara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!! I love the ending you chose for the fic!! And I really like how tsunade told him about the 'mission'....overall, I really like this story! Good job and keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLY can't wait for the next chapter hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zeke Marlin On: May 12, 2007 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good for the most part, but the end pissed me off, in the letter tsunade wrote she said the girl werent named, and you didnt even right that they name them, would like to see there life as a family and stuff, so think on that
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Title: WOW 2!
Reviewed By: Kingkakashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I can improve on the review I gave before. but I wasn't an MM member yet when I wrote it. I'll just say I'm looking forward to more Kurenai stories from you. I'm going to have one or more in my current story eventually.
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Reviewed By: drag0nsclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 13:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly brilliant. 10 out of 10. I personally wouldn't mind to read the story if you say ontinued it to include his daughters. Anyways very rare but excellent pairing, and a very well writen story. Well done! great work.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: KingKakashi On: April 15, 2007 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a fantastic story, Kurenai is such an overlooked character in general. It was great that someone finally decided to write a well thought out tale involving her. You did it great, and I would love to see more stories involving Naruto and Kurenai or Kurenai in general from you! Keep up the excellent work.
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Title: awsome fic, hoping for more
Reviewed By: noname z On: February 17, 2007 11:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really great fic with a very interesting pairing. I never really considered a Naruto+Kurenai before but i really like it and the way you have written your story and described the characters. I would really love to read a continuation to it. Not only that, but it would be great if you could (maybe in form of flashbacks) write about everyones reactions to Kurenai´s pregnancy and Naruto´s fatherhood. I would have loved to play mouse when (for example) Tsunade or Anko found out or when Kurenai told her team (Hinata). You could write a lot of interesting things about her feelings and thoughts and so on. So pleasepleasepleaseplease write more!!!
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Title: pleasantly suprised.
Reviewed By: Not a Naruto Fan On: February 13, 2007 03:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not a fan of Naruto (OMG!111wtf?!11). I don't necessarily dislike it - I just don't consider myself a fan. I've seen some episodes, but not enough to know much about the series. That being said, this is a great fanfic on many levels. Even if it wasn't Naruto-themed, I think I'd enjoy it. Everyone loves meaningless sex now and then ( who doesn't :D), but this fic gave some... fluff to it. Good fluff. I enjoyed said fluff. Also, I liked how there weren't any real loose ends (ie, cheap holes to make room for future chapters / prequels). Length was great; not too long, not too short. Pacing was leveled and reasonable. Truly the best fic I've read. Ever. Best lemon, best fic... just awesome. I feel like getting into Naruto now :) But yes, seriously - much congratulations. You should really feel proud of yourself for this one.
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Title: please update story
Reviewed By: killjoy3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey really loved the fic but please add another chapter or make a story that comes after it to continue it and let me know what the name will be
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, and I wouldn't mind seeing a couple of more chapters seeing how Naruto acts with his new family or the wedding.
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Reviewed By: Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice
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Title: NaruKure at its best!
Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Naruto/Kurenai fic I've ever read, and I've read quite a few. Some go too far with the story, others don't go far enough. This was perfect. I will always remember this as being one of the greats. I'm going to check to see what else you've written.
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