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Reviewed By: Akuma-Heika On: August 27, 2014 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job. Some follow up chapters would be nice, but do what
you want to do.
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Reviewed By: Akuma-Heika On: September 18, 2013 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I might add a couple sequel chapters dealing with the fallout of Naruto's decision and his new 'family', but it's unlikely. hope you do. This was a great read! |
Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very nice one shot. I do not total agree with the ending as I still think she would need to go on high end missions but it was very well done.
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Reviewed By: Alec_potter On: November 07, 2008 14:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was nice except for the children part. I think you could have expanded instead by having Naruto and Kurenai have an affair and continue on that. Later on you could have left it at marriage. Children so soon were a bit too much. But liked your fic never the less. ATB.
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Reviewed By: Meikyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed your story, very mature style, good ending, few gramatical errors, great ending; not sappy at all. keep the good work ^-^
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it. But I enjoy everthing you write. I haven't seen any new work though. I hope that changes.
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Reviewed By: j05h360 On: July 09, 2008 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok look, to put it simply i loved this fanfic. It was remarkably original and creative. You have done a fantastic job with this and I would love it if you kept writing about it. I enjoyed reading this fanfic almost as much as I love to play video games, and I really love to play video games. Like I said before fantastic job and please add more to the story.
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Reviewed By: Narutomaniac On: February 05, 2008 12:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! It was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!! great work the lemon was superb and just overall great only flaw I had with the whole thing was the Anko being a slut when she clearly wouldn't be. But I easily overlooked that part for the unique pairing and great lemon also the end was great.
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Reviewed By: hisakata On: December 09, 2007 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that is a story i must say that is the best work of yours i ever read and hope to see more...
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, yeah. Im kind of at a loss for words. That fic was awesome. I another chapter or 2 about how Naruto handles things and how they're family ends up would be great. Anyway overall....fantastic.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 12:24 EST
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Over all I like it, the set up is reasonbly believable something most lemons or even romance fics just can't seem to care about most of the time. Second the lemon scene is slow, emotional and incredibly sexy. Like I always try to point out to bad lemon fics, it's often the setting, the build up and the emotions that make the sex hot, not just the physical actions. The after effects were not what I imagined, interesting to be sure but I suppose the little pervert in me kind of hoped some how it end with a three some with Hinata. I know she had three years to deal with it, but over all I have to say Hinata seems to have taken that her favorite teacher sleeping with her crush very well.. all though this new more violent Hinata might have a few blows with Naruto when they meet up.
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Faoron [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was great. Perfect characterizations. The smut was well-written, too. :p Anyway, great story.
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Title: Marvelously Done
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: It's not cliché like I've seen so many times before. It's not overly sappy, the character's don't go Out of Character much at all, and this could have very well fit in somewhere in the Canon storyline. Spelling & Grammar: Very few mistakes, if any, within this. I'm pretty sure if I was scrutinizing that I would pick up some, but I'm not sure I want to ruin this wonderful fic for myself or anybody else by being that much of a prick. Originality/Creativity: I don't have many things to say on this one. It's creative, sure, and I've only seen it done once or twice before, and those weren't for this pairing, but it's not perfect or one-of-a-kind, though with that ending it gets a little closer. Enjoyment Factor: Fun to read. Not overly detailed so as to leave one with no ability to comprehend what is going on with their own mind, but it isn't so under detailed so as to leave you trying to figure it all out. Jiraiya being blamed to it by Tsunade was...interesting...and disturbingly correct, to say the least. Overall Rating: I'd say that it should stay a OneShot, since you risk ruining it completely by making it otherwise. Sure, it could get better but it would make it better only for some, and ruin it for others. It has the right amount of comedy, foreboding, and suspense right near the end that I am sure most people picked up on. It's very well done and I would, personally, leave it as it is right now, a (very good) OneShot. I'm sure some really talented people could probably get a couple more chapters out of it, but...as I've said, it's too much of a risk. All in all, I love it, think it should be left as is, and is a create story all around.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Yrael On: July 18, 2007 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only fic involving pregnancy that I've EVER enjoyed. Sorry for this being such a short review, but... I can't describe how great the impression this has left on me. I would LOVE to see something similar to this continued, but you ended it at JUST the right spot. gg
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Reviewed By: Shariganhater86 On: July 07, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic while i wish it would've gone longer i know it couldn't so good job if you get the chance please read my story and tell me what you think it is titled Rage of the Ranmyaku i like having more experienced authors giving me thier opinions it helps alot so keep up the good work ja nee
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